{"id":9664,"date":"2019-11-26T20:28:54","date_gmt":"2019-11-26T20:28:54","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/tips\/?p=9664"},"modified":"2024-05-02T15:43:45","modified_gmt":"2024-05-02T15:43:45","slug":"cringe-worthy-pr-pitches","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/tips-of-the-week\/cringe-worthy-pr-pitches\/","title":{"rendered":"Cringe-worthy PR Pitches"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: center;\">Issue #1336 Nov. 26, 2019<br \/>\nPublisher: Joan Stewart<\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\">&#8220;Tips, Tricks and Tools for Free Publicity&#8221;<\/h2>\n<h3><strong>In This Issue<\/strong><\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Cringe-worthy PR Pitches<\/li>\n<li>Another Cliche to Avoid<\/li>\n<li>Today: Help with Your Online Course<\/li>\n<li>Hound\u00a0Video\u00a0of the Week<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<blockquote><p><strong>This Week in the Hound House:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been looking for a garden tote for a friend&#8217;s Christmas gift, something sturdy enough to hold good-quality gardening tools. I couldn&#8217;t find anything online that had decent reviews. Fiskars to the rescue! I bought this canvas <a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Fiskars-Garden-Bucket-included-394240-1002\/dp\/B00005YX30\/ref=sr_1_4\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Garden Bucket Caddy<\/a> that fits snugly around a 5-gallon bucket and has 11 pockets for tools, a beverage and even a mobile phone. It arrived yesterday and it&#8217;s perfect. Today, I&#8217;m headed to Home Depot to buy the bucket.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<h3 style=\"text-align: left;\">1. Cringe-worthy PR Pitches<\/h3>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-9669 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/tips\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2019\/11\/Mike-Masnick-tweet.jpg\" alt=\"Cringe-worthy PR Pitches\" width=\"300\" height=\"115\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Deliver a rotten pitch to a journalist and chances are she could humiliate you publicly.<\/p>\n<p>Muck Rack, which makes PR software to help find journalists, offers a monthly round-up of cringe-worthy pitches from journalists who are sharing them on Twitter. They&#8217;ll leave you howling. Here&#8217;s one of my favorites:<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;Hey Erin. I wanted to check in to see if you got my latest email (that&#8217;s not entirely true since we have email tracking, but this a nice way of re-sending an email.) Just curious if you were looking for content around valuations and if you&#8217;re open to connecting and collaborating.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;No problem if you&#8217;re not open to it, but I&#8217;ll most likely be emailing you until I hear back. Cheers!&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>You wouldn&#8217;t do anything like that, would you? Please tell me you wouldn&#8217;t.<\/p>\n<p><strong>To do:<\/strong> Read <a href=\"https:\/\/muckrack.com\/blog\/2019\/11\/15\/this-month-in-bad-pr-pitches-24\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">&#8220;This month in bad PR pitches.&#8221;<\/a><\/p>\n<p>#BadPitches #PRPitches<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"text-align: left;\">2. Another Annoying Cliche to Avoid<\/h3>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-9668 \" src=\"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/tips\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2019\/11\/mary-tyler-moore-news-team2.jpg\" alt=\"Another Annoying Cliche to Avoid\" width=\"299\" height=\"220\" \/><\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m a news junkie and watch mostly TV news shows featuring political commentary.<\/p>\n<p>Every day for the last two weeks, I&#8217;ve heard a talk show host or news anchor use the word &#8220;unpack.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;Can you unpack the story for us?&#8221; the host asks his guest.<\/p>\n<p>In an article in the L.A. Times, architecture critic <strong>Christopher Hawthorne<\/strong> says the biggest offenders are journalists and academics who use it to mean any effort to break a complicated idea, theory or assumption into separate parts so it&#8217;s easier to understand.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;There&#8217;s so much unpacking going on at a typical symposium or conference these days that you begin to worry about tripping over all the empty luggage,&#8221; he writes.<\/p>\n<p><strong>To do:<\/strong> Don&#8217;t let this word creep into your writing or speech. The word &#8220;explain&#8221; should work fine. If you need to add pizzazz to your copy, let me help. In a 30-minute Rent My Brain session, I can critique an article, website copy, sales page, book description or marketing materials like your bio. <a href=\"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/need-immediate-one-on-one-help-rent-my-brain\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Read more about what the session includes.\u00a0<\/a><\/p>\n<p>#Copywriting #Cliches<\/p>\n<h3>3. Today: Help with Your Online Course<\/h3>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-9670 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/tips\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2019\/11\/Online-Educaton3.jpg\" alt=\"Today: Help with Your Online Course\" width=\"300\" height=\"176\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Planning to write a nonfiction book?<\/p>\n<p>Don&#8217;t start until you&#8217;ve first created an online course.<\/p>\n<p>Why?<\/p>\n<p>Because readers who love the book will be looking for other ways you can help them. And if you have nothing more to offer, they&#8217;ll give their credit card number to one of your competitors who does.<\/p>\n<p>Today, at <strong>2 and 7 p.m. Eastern, Steve Harrison<\/strong> will explain all the benefits of an online course based on your book or expertise, and how his team can build it for you.<\/p>\n<p>You can sell the course from your website 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. They typically sell for 5 to 10 times what your book costs.<\/p>\n<p>An online course is also an excellent &#8220;upsell&#8221; from your free or paid speaking engagements.<\/p>\n<p><strong>To do:<\/strong> If you&#8217;re a nonfiction author, speaker or expert, register for today&#8217;s free session on <a href=\"https:\/\/m164.isrefer.com\/go\/yopme0419\/A10011\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">&#8220;Your Online Course Made Easy&#8221;<\/a> using this affiliate link.<\/p>\n<p>#OnlineCourse #RemoteTraining<\/p>\n<h3>4. Hound\u00a0Video of the Week<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/web.archive.org\/web\/20201120011803\/https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=IYPpDv4rZMU\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-9667 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/tips\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2019\/11\/captain.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"165\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Meet Captain, the puppy that&#8217;s training to be a service dog by hanging around the Washington Capitols hockey team. Why a hockey team? <a href=\"https:\/\/web.archive.org\/web\/20201120011803\/https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=IYPpDv4rZMU\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">This cute video explains.<\/a><\/p>\n[Tweet &#8220;#PublicityTips &#8212; Cringe-worthy PR Pitches #BadPitches #PRPitches&#8221;]\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<h2>The Publicity Hound&#8217;s Tips of the Week<\/h2>\n<h3>&#8211; Issue #1336 Nov. 26, 2019<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Cringe-worthy PR Pitches\n<\/li>\n<li>Another Cliche to Avoid<\/li>\n<li>Today: Help with Your Online Course<\/li>\n<li>Hound Video of the Week<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/tips-of-the-week\/cringe-worthy-pr-pitches\/\" rel=\"nofollow\" class=\"rmlink\">Read more<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":9671,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_genesis_hide_title":false,"_genesis_hide_breadcrumbs":false,"_genesis_hide_singular_image":false,"_genesis_hide_footer_widgets":false,"_genesis_custom_body_class":"","_genesis_custom_post_class":"","_genesis_layout":"","iawp_total_views":5,"wds_primary_category":6,"footnotes":""},"categories":[6],"tags":[273,477,537],"class_list":{"0":"post-9664","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","5":"has-post-thumbnail","7":"category-tips-of-the-week","8":"tag-copywriting","9":"tag-online-courses","10":"tag-pr-pitches","11":"entry"},"featured_image_src":null,"featured_image_src_square":null,"author_info":{"display_name":"Joan Stewart","author_link":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/author\/jstewart\/"},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/9664","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=9664"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/9664\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=9664"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=9664"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=9664"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}