{"id":24917,"date":"2005-03-18T22:56:40","date_gmt":"2005-03-18T22:56:40","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/publicityhound.com\/blog\/prblog\/?p=28"},"modified":"2025-06-13T14:08:30","modified_gmt":"2025-06-13T14:08:30","slug":"use-sales-copy-techniques-when-pitching","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/marketing\/use-sales-copy-techniques-when-pitching\/","title":{"rendered":"Use sales copy techniques when pitching"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>When you send a snail-mail or email pitch to a journalist, does the copylook like a big block of gray? Or do you flag the journalist to the most importance elements of your pitch by using things such as sub-heads, boldtype, indented paragraphs, underlined text and a post-script?<\/p>\n<p>Publicity Hounds who borrow those techniques, used by the world&#8217;s top sales copy writers, will probably get better results than those who don&#8217;t. Yet too many publicists fail to realize that a great pitch isn&#8217;t made up of only words and phrases. A pitch letter, for example, should include an enticing postscript that offers other sources for the reporter, or tells a reporter that you&#8217;re offering the idea to her first.<\/p>\n<p>Lorrie Morgan-Ferrero, an expert in how to write sterling sales copy, says her techniques are as effective for news releases and pitch letters as they are for direct-mail pieces. When she appeared as my guest last year during a teleseminar, we offered three before-and-after examples. We took a wordy news release and turned it into a one-page attention grabber. We edited vague copy on someone&#8217;s home page and turned it into a crystal-clear explanation of how the website owner can help visitors. And we turned a news release that the media would never have printed into an eye-catching pitch letter.<\/p>\n<p>Those are the handouts you can download when you buy the cassette tape, CD or electronic transcript titled &#8220;<a HREF=\"https:\/\/www.publicityhound.com\/publicity-products\/marketing-tapes\/redhotcopy.htm\" TARGET=\"_blank\">How to Write Red-Hot Sales Copy That Woos Journalists<\/a>.&#8221;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>When you send a snail-mail or email pitch to a journalist, does the copylook like a big block of gray? Or do you flag the journalist to the most importance elements of your pitch by using things such as sub-heads, boldtype, indented paragraphs, underlined text and a post-script? Publicity Hounds who borrow those techniques, used\u2026&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/marketing\/use-sales-copy-techniques-when-pitching\/\" class=\"rmlink\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_genesis_hide_title":false,"_genesis_hide_breadcrumbs":false,"_genesis_hide_singular_image":false,"_genesis_hide_footer_widgets":false,"_genesis_custom_body_class":"","_genesis_custom_post_class":"","_genesis_layout":"","iawp_total_views":1,"wds_primary_category":1,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[205,610],"class_list":{"0":"post-24917","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","6":"category-marketing","7":"tag-pitching","8":"tag-publicist","9":"entry"},"featured_image_src":null,"featured_image_src_square":null,"author_info":{"display_name":"Joan Stewart","author_link":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/author\/jstewart\/"},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/24917","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=24917"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/24917\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":41935,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/24917\/revisions\/41935"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=24917"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=24917"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/purelysupp.com\/publicity\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=24917"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}